She

The way she twists her hair 
and places back that wayward 
wisp behind her ear, the way she 
checks her face in every mirror. 

How she shimmers to the ladies' 
room to re-apply her lipstick, 
or she lingers irresistibly 
as you politely hold the door ajar. 

The way she glides so smoothly; 
you're helpless as you fall 
beneath her rule, under her spell 
you're both the best man and the fool.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Breath-taking lines, the anticipated emotions are intense and gripping. Last line was perfect, so is the title.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Cynthia! much obliged. Best wishes, Keith
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:41 PM
beautiful sensual imagery Keith:-) hugs Jan xx7
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 7:41 PM
I am most grateful to you! Best wishes, Keith
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