She

Beach babe
My tanned blond
Bronzing under natures sun
My heart reaches out to her
Beauty




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Heather Hill

March 15, 2010 at 9:21 PM

just lovely, i can see her now :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2010 at 9:52 PM

Beautiful. Is this for New Jersey? heehee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 12, 2010 at 3:11 PM

Wonderful Cinquain James and sounds like a lovely lady too.. it will soon be beach weather ...hurrah!!! luv.. "Sweetheart" .. thankxxx so much for your warm and welcome comments on all my poetry reads tonight... glad u enjoyed my luv poetry.. Ron is a lucky guy and I am a lucky girl and we have found some really lucky luv.. after 15 years of on again off again its finally on to stay... another big hurrah!!! luv.. "Sweetheart"

Samantha Waller

March 11, 2010 at 11:04 PM

nice poem! now i gotta get to the beach!! samantha

Sara Kendrick

March 11, 2010 at 3:32 PM

Looking for the sun and maybe a trip to the beach to relax...Hope that you get to go and live the fantasy of the poem...Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

March 11, 2010 at 2:30 PM

Jonesing for summer and... more, James! Nice poem. -Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

March 11, 2010 at 2:13 PM

An alluring image of a woman basking in the sun and the sense of longing comes through so well, James. Great cinquain, Highlander! She may be dreaming of Semaj? Love, Carolyn

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