She

There's a warmth in her smile, 
There's a glow from her face
There's a twinkle in her eye
She walks with boldness, but yet grace
and when she looks at you, 
kindness and caring shines through
Talk to her and she's open, 
laugh with her and you feel alive
Although your only five foot six 
She'll make you feel six foot five
She has a wicked side too
When you get that close the passion will flow
You'll feel there's no doubt that she wants you so 
So why do you run and what is so wrong
What stops you from wanting to be that one
What makes you wander from her door
She's not controlling, she's trusting, loving and more 
So why can't she be the one you adore
She's confused, she doesn't know why or 
What more she can do. 
Its the same old story it's not just you. 
She's just herself, there's no game to play
She just wants love the old fashioned way.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/23/2010 3:43:00 PM
Lovely piece, and there is no harm in being loved the old fashioned way, i wish >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 9:39:00 PM
Very nicely done. Ah, yes,. the men only seem to want the bad women. Just like many women seem lured by the bad boy. Too bad the good ones just don't hook up with the other good ones! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/22/2010 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Allie. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:28:00 AM
And that's a nice way to love, great piece loved it Daniel
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