She

SHE She fell – in despair She crashed – to the floor She broke – her soul She cried – all night She crawled – slowly She hurt – in pain She surrendered – her heart Then She Rose Again In no fear of no pain.

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David Smith

Date: 2/1/2020 2:03:00 PM

Writing does seem to be good for cleansing a wound often for good, and poetry seems to be the best form of writing to make it sure. The soup seems to be the more genuine of all the groups. This piece showcases your skills in writing an effective poem. The length of this work is perfect. Regards David in NZ

Ann Foster

Date: 11/20/2019 3:39:00 AM

Don't fall again. You can do anything. Let no one put you there... Excellent emotional write. well written... Ann