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Hand holding chin elbow on rail she stares out at the bay but she is not there; sad eyes say otherwise Beyond the beauty of the day sadness shows what lies inside- what beauty- cannot hide

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Date: 4/15/2019 9:54:00 AM
Brilliantly expressed! When the spirit is somewhere else and the body is just parked while the spirit deals. Beautiful interpretation and lots of work went into this!
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Date: 4/13/2019 3:50:00 PM
real sadness cannot be masked... beautifully essayed, allen...huggs
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/13/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you nette

Book: Shattered Sighs