Shattering

Without counting the pendulum swings
I fall from trees without leaves for I am simply the bird
Don’t you know what it feels like to kiss the horizon
I am at a crossroads so why not play tic tac toe?

I fall from trees without leaves for I am simply the bird
With you becoming the silver wrapped around my finger
I am at a crossroads so why not play tic tac toe?
For your footsteps turn to rust like the heart you left them on

With you becoming the silver wrapped around my finger
I reach to tie my shoes but they are knotted together
Your footsteps turn to rust like the heart you left them on
I still know the sun tells me to hide my heart

I reach to tie my shoe but they are knotted together
The mirror of my soul is prone to shattering
I still know the sun tells me to hide my heart
I only listen to what keeps me silent

The mirror of my soul is prone to shattering
You have forced me to fade out like a firefly
I only listen to what keeps me silent
My eyes are soaked from weeping willows

The mirror of my soul is prone to shattering
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Wow! I like this poem you wrote. The last line makes me sad. Have a nice evening my friend.
Blade Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Thank you so much! You too.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 11:02 AM
You did the form justice. Wonderful pantoum, Iris.
Blade Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate the compliment.
Teagan Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:25 PM
This is really good, Iris, I love your wording, it really kept my interest.
Blade Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Becca, it means a lot. Have a nice day!
One Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Sorry.. silly phone! Your last stanza should have the first and third line. You have forced me to fade out like a firefly Don’t you know what it feels like to kiss the horizon My eyes are soaked from weeping willows Without counting the pendulum swings Also they can rhyme and have a syllable count. Sorry I should have told you via soup mail.
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Oh you are right! I will go back and edit that later. Thank you Silent.
One Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 11:24 AM
No, a pantoum has repetitive lines.. I have a couple and Susan Ashley has some great pantoums also...
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Oh this does repeat, quite a lot actually. Every line repeats at least once.
One Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:18 AM
By the way this is not a pantoum...
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Really? I looked it up on a few different websites to be sure and it seems that this is definitely a pantoum, but I could be wrong.
One Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:17 AM
That opening line is amazing.. another great poem from your pen...
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you so much Silent! I appreciate it.
Krampe Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Awesome. Love the imagery. Fave.
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Wow that is a high compliment, hope you visit again. Thank you!
Sands Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Beautifully expressed Iris :)
Blade Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much Heidi!
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