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Shattered Love

I embrace you … you hold me tight,
   sounds of swift ivory doves cry out- 
fleeting into the ebon night; for our love loses not insight,
   never cursed or full of deep blight;
      a million fairytales tremble at us,
        they know how our love does outshine with flickering light . . . 

black ravens plague this existence,
   saturated in loneliness were you-
yet, you stayed with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease,
   descending onto my grateful knees;
      I sense your essence in the breeze,
        I know the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease . . . 

as the tempest rages in warm rains,
   the winds blows, and gusts prevail-
emerging from the dust I was found,
   weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains
      your genuine adoration still sustains
        intense obscurity of calamity I faced before you attains . . . 

sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection,
   for I am a woman craving to be near you for all of eternity-
bound by love and affection
   my alleviation found in perfection
      and I shall feel this pure affection for you, my beloved eternally
        and . . . 

oh . . .  my beloved darling I have tried so hard,
   to go on without you in my life -
but you call my name each night over and over and over, you call me;
        so, I stand with a dagger at your eternal tomb,
           ready to thrust it-  into my broken heart . . .   

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September 8, 2019


Poetry/Verse/Shattered Love
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1179-372-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

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Mcintosh Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 3:55 AM
Congrats and it's a awesome poem. Bless you, Gina
La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Gina, thanks for the awesome and the congrats !
There Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heart... <3
La France Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Hello, thanks for the congrats !
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:03 AM
LOVE the stanza you wrote at the end. It created a twist I was not expecting. Beautifully expressed...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. :)-luloo
La France Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Lu, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my great placement, so honored !
Arowolo Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Wonderful piece, Dear heart ..This is superb. Keep it up great poet. You are a lovely writer.
La France Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Thank you so much for visiting and for the compliment !
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