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I embrace you … you hold me tight, sounds of swift ivory doves cry out- fleeting into the ebon night; for our love loses not insight, never cursed or full of deep blight; a million fairytales tremble at us, they know how our love does outshine with flickering light . . . black ravens plague this existence, saturated in loneliness were you- yet, you stayed with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease, descending onto my grateful knees; I sense your essence in the breeze, I know the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease . . . as the tempest rages in warm rains, the winds blows, and gusts prevail- emerging from the dust I was found, weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains your genuine adoration still sustains intense obscurity of calamity I faced before you attains . . . sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection, for I am a woman craving to be near you for all of eternity- bound by love and affection my alleviation found in perfection and I shall feel this pure affection for you, my beloved eternally and . . . oh . . . my beloved darling I have tried so hard, to go on without you in my life - but you call my name each night over and over and over, you call me; so, I stand with a dagger at your eternal tomb, ready to thrust it- into my broken heart . . . _________________________ September 8, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Shattered Love Copyright Protected, ID 19-1179-372-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Lu's Poem Switcher Roo sponsor, Lu Loo Second Place

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Date: 10/8/2019 3:55:00 AM
Congrats and it's a awesome poem. Bless you, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2019 9:22:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the awesome and the congrats !
Date: 10/7/2019 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heart... <3
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2019 6:25:00 PM
Hello, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 10/7/2019 6:03:00 AM
LOVE the stanza you wrote at the end. It created a twist I was not expecting. Beautifully expressed...Congratulations on your placement and thank you for your participation. :)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2019 1:21:00 PM
Lu, thanks for another inspiring contest and for my great placement, so honored !
Date: 9/19/2019 7:58:00 AM
Wonderful piece, Dear heart ..This is superb. Keep it up great poet. You are a lovely writer.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting and for the compliment !