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Broken Wounds will not heal Surrounded by sadness Grief pours from every single line Constance Form used traditional Cinquain 2,4,6,8,2 syllables Contest: Fragment of Life Sponsor: Broken Wings 02~24~16

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Date: 3/18/2016 2:42:00 AM
Anytime Jan....Linda
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Date: 3/15/2016 10:56:00 AM
Jan, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/17/2016 7:39:00 PM
Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2016 10:14:00 AM
Congrats, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2016 4:42:00 PM
Many thanks Sarita:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2016 8:26:00 PM
Vry touching.....sentimental..... Congrats
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Rizwana:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2016 8:25:00 AM
Emotional win. Congratulations
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 10:07:00 PM
Sadly beautiful Jan.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 3/10/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 7:34:00 PM
Hi Jan, Very sad and beautiful. Well done, and congrats on ascending to the top of the podium! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/10/2016 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Brian:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 3:43:00 PM
Jan, you are too good to beat. Congradulations.
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Date: 3/10/2016 3:45:00 PM
I'm just lucky Jean:-) I write and hope the sponsor likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 1:36:00 PM
Clever use of the form for a dedication piece, Jan-- congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/8/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 1:19:00 PM
This is a gift. Congratulations on your first place Jan. Beautiful!
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks Connie I am really pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 1:19:00 PM
very moving , congrats on your place
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Jan
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations for the win....
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2016 6:44:00 AM
Deep, wonderful, vivid.... Congrats for your top placement Jan!!! ;-) Your song reminds me of Dolly Parton's country song "Eagle when she flies"...
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:31:00 PM
Oh I must have a listen to that Teddy I don't think I am familair with it:-) thanks :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:30:00 PM
Many thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 9:17:00 PM
Nicely done Jan...I feel in the picture the wings are not broken really, but it just hurts to fly.
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Ed I found the image after I wrote the poem and the words seemed to fit so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 3:24:00 PM
wow, very clever way you did this one. I am surprised I am only seeing it now. Congrats , Jan.
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:28:00 PM
I didn't intend for the poem to be about Constance but it just evolved that way:-) I'm so glad she liked it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 12:40:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on the “Fragment Of Life” contest : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:27:00 PM
Many thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/8/2016 1:27:00 PM
Many thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 11:06:00 AM
I felt vibes when I first read this that it would place high, and it shot right up!! Congratulations!:) hugs // paul
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:27:00 PM
Many thanks Paul I'm so glad she liked it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 10:29:00 AM
Perfect, Jan, using our dear Broken Wings for your 'fragment of life' theme. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:26:00 PM
Many thanks Sandra I'm so pleased Constance liked it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2016 8:18:00 AM
Oh Jan , I love the opening and ending line. Perfect for her contest. An awesome cinquain congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/8/2016 1:26:00 PM
Many thanks Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/29/2016 12:15:00 AM
A very beautifully written description of poems by Constance, and a great tribute to her. I'm a great fan of her sad and melancholy writing. Best vwishes for the contest. T.J
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/29/2016 11:51:00 AM
I adore her poems TJ they are so sad yet so so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/27/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Jan. I suppose I don't know much about Constance, though I see her off and on...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/27/2016 7:35:00 PM
:-) as I said the poem just evolved it wasn't mean to be about her it just turned out that way:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/25/2016 8:55:00 PM
I can imagine some sort of heartbreak going on in this poem, from someone named Constance. Sometimes all it takes is a name to resurrect all those old feelings. Nice cinquain, Jan. The last line sums it up.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/26/2016 3:43:00 AM
Constance is the real name of Broken Wings - her poems are melancholy from all the grief she has suffered in her life. When I started the poem I never intended for it to be about her... but it just evolved like that - I do hope she likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/25/2016 8:57:00 PM
Reading the comments here, perhaps I misinterpreted this piece. Not sure who Constance is ... a poet on this site?
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