Shattered and Broken

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For in the end 
we are all broken,
falling to moments like this
Scattered the pieces of 
love never spoken,
lost in the whispers amiss

Thundercloud feelings 
now forming,
save me in spite of my tears
Clouds of the past darken, 
constantly storming,
drenched far beneath dampened fears

Caught in a flood 
of emotions,
silent the sky bids adieu 
Running from tides 
now awakening oceans,
ripples remind me of you

Seeing the moon 
brightly glowing,
pointing its beams down in shame
Checking a list between 
wanting and knowing,
it is my own fault to blame

Why can’t I make 
this decision,
here as my world comes a part
Feeling the blade of 
your sharpened incision,
slicing a piece of my heart

Oh how I wish I 
were blinded,
truly unable to see
Then of these dreams I now 
find I’m reminded,
would have no bearing on me

Still there’s a part 
that is shaken,
rooted in memories grown
Tossed on the roadside of 
shadows forsaken,
hopelessly left all alone

Cast to the depths 
that are calling,
no need to look for the dawn
Shattered and broken and 
steadily falling,
all since the day you were gone


9/23/19

Written for the: Pick a line, any line Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux 

‘For in the end we are all broken’ – A line from Richard’s poem “Broken People”

‘Save me in spite of my tears’ – A line from my poem, “So Soft is the Sonnet of Willows”
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Lamoureux Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Well done, congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Thanks so very much Richard
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Your wonderful metaphors make this piece so special Chris. Congratulations on your deserving second placement! I am in Hilo visiting my granddaughters right now. Will comment more when I can. xxoo
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much Connie. Have fun with your granddaughters.
Hamilton Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:49 AM
This is a special write Chris, I love it's sincere depth of hurt and pain, reflects accurately(I imagine) how a despondent person feels. I have to fave this one, it really strikes me!
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thanks so much John. Feelings I know first hand sadly.
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:14 AM
great rhythm and rhyme dear Chris, lovely poem as always...:)-luloo
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thanks so very much Luloo
Adams Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Back to say congratulations my friend :) hugs
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Sandy. : )
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Congratulations for your win , my friend :)
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thank Heidi for your kindness.
Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:56 PM
In the darkest verse, your talented pen shines through, my friend. Wonderfully devastating, Chris. Warm wishes, Gershon (Please see soup mail).
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you so very much Gershon. I am thrilled you enjoyed this sad piece. I appreciate you my friend.
There Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 6:57 PM
A powerful piece ~ heartbreaking, but well-written... Good luck in the contest!
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your kindness is a gift to me each day
Adams Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:15 PM
I love how you pieced this one together, one can feel the sadness...i think Rick will love this poem...i know i do...excellent penning my friend! :) hugs
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Sandy. I always look forward to your wonderful and encouraging comments on my work.
Chiri Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:14 PM
You bring tears to my eyes Chris for I know what you speak of! Pain I wish would leave but we are destined to hurt forever it seems! Again I feel for you and all the pain you hold to yourself! I feel the same but time does move on and as they say"fake it till you make it" for as crude as it sounds at times feels that is all one does! Beautifully written of course pain holds beauty and this holds so much!;)
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Brenda. Most of the time I do "fake it" but some days I just can't keep it together. I appreciate you my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:13 PM
I think Richard's challenge is so inspiring. I really need to get on this one!! But i could never do justice to one of Richard's lines the way you did HERE. Splendid writing, my friend. Beautiful sadness.
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea for all of the kindness you show me
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Love can hurt so deeply and can break us. This is perfect for the contest Chris. Looks like a winner. So well written :)
Green Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Yeah you did it...made me weepy, so good...but so sad, will do well in the contest, if I know Rick he will love this!
Green Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Thanks so much John. I really struggled with this but I think I got it to a place where I like it, I am glad you did.
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