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Shattered and Broken

` For in the end we are all broken, falling to moments like this Scattered the pieces of love never spoken, lost in the whispers amiss Thundercloud feelings now forming, save me in spite of my tears Clouds of the past darken, constantly storming, drenched far beneath dampened fears Caught in a flood of emotions, silent the sky bids adieu Running from tides now awakening oceans, ripples remind me of you Seeing the moon brightly glowing, pointing its beams down in shame Checking a list between wanting and knowing, it is my own fault to blame Why can’t I make this decision, here as my world comes a part Feeling the blade of your sharpened incision, slicing a piece of my heart Oh how I wish I were blinded, truly unable to see Then of these dreams I now find I’m reminded, would have no bearing on me Still there’s a part that is shaken, rooted in memories grown Tossed on the roadside of shadows forsaken, hopelessly left all alone Cast to the depths that are calling, no need to look for the dawn Shattered and broken and steadily falling, all since the day you were gone 9/23/19 Written for the: Pick a line, any line Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux ‘For in the end we are all broken’ – A line from Richard’s poem “Broken People” ‘Save me in spite of my tears’ – A line from my poem, “So Soft is the Sonnet of Willows”

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Date: 10/12/2019 9:15:00 AM
Well done, congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thanks so very much Richard
Date: 10/9/2019 1:14:00 PM
Your wonderful metaphors make this piece so special Chris. Congratulations on your deserving second placement! I am in Hilo visiting my granddaughters right now. Will comment more when I can. xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie. Have fun with your granddaughters.
Date: 10/9/2019 9:49:00 AM
This is a special write Chris, I love it's sincere depth of hurt and pain, reflects accurately(I imagine) how a despondent person feels. I have to fave this one, it really strikes me!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thanks so much John. Feelings I know first hand sadly.
Date: 10/9/2019 8:14:00 AM
great rhythm and rhyme dear Chris, lovely poem as always...:)-luloo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so very much Luloo
Date: 10/8/2019 6:10:00 PM
Back to say congratulations my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. : )
Date: 10/8/2019 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations for your win , my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:41:00 AM
Thank Heidi for your kindness.
Date: 9/26/2019 8:56:00 PM
In the darkest verse, your talented pen shines through, my friend. Wonderfully devastating, Chris. Warm wishes, Gershon (Please see soup mail).
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Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Gershon. I am thrilled you enjoyed this sad piece. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 9/26/2019 6:57:00 PM
A powerful piece ~ heartbreaking, but well-written... Good luck in the contest!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your kindness is a gift to me each day
Date: 9/26/2019 5:15:00 PM
I love how you pieced this one together, one can feel the sadness...i think Rick will love this poem...i know i do...excellent penning my friend! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I always look forward to your wonderful and encouraging comments on my work.
Date: 9/26/2019 5:14:00 PM
You bring tears to my eyes Chris for I know what you speak of! Pain I wish would leave but we are destined to hurt forever it seems! Again I feel for you and all the pain you hold to yourself! I feel the same but time does move on and as they say"fake it till you make it" for as crude as it sounds at times feels that is all one does! Beautifully written of course pain holds beauty and this holds so much!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. Most of the time I do "fake it" but some days I just can't keep it together. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 9/26/2019 5:13:00 PM
I think Richard's challenge is so inspiring. I really need to get on this one!! But i could never do justice to one of Richard's lines the way you did HERE. Splendid writing, my friend. Beautiful sadness.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea for all of the kindness you show me
Date: 9/26/2019 4:13:00 PM
Love can hurt so deeply and can break us. This is perfect for the contest Chris. Looks like a winner. So well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 9/26/2019 4:00:00 PM
Yeah you did it...made me weepy, so good...but so sad, will do well in the contest, if I know Rick he will love this!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much John. I really struggled with this but I think I got it to a place where I like it, I am glad you did.

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