Shattered

You tear me down and tell me your trying to
                    rebuild your life.
But out of the rubble you wish for me to rise but
         you stole all the good that made me.
I sit here and not know what to do but I crumble
    more and more as the days pass and you ask
                     WHAT'S WRONG!
Your whats wrong with me, I was once strong now
   I'm dead and falling apart wishing for that final
            push towards condemnation.
I hope that your life is rebuilt because i lay here
          broken, shattered, and in ruins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:44 AM
I stopped by to read some more of your poetry today. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again another time to read more Brittany. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Very sad touchy and moving of the broken heart on whom someone's life is built, nice expressions, Brittany
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