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Shattered

You tear me down and tell me your trying to rebuild your life. But out of the rubble you wish for me to rise but you stole all the good that made me. I sit here and not know what to do but I crumble more and more as the days pass and you ask WHAT'S WRONG! Your whats wrong with me, I was once strong now I'm dead and falling apart wishing for that final push towards condemnation. I hope that your life is rebuilt because i lay here broken, shattered, and in ruins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/6/2011 7:44:00 AM
I stopped by to read some more of your poetry today. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again another time to read more Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:58:00 AM
Very sad touchy and moving of the broken heart on whom someone's life is built, nice expressions, Brittany
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