Shattered

I thought
              love was safe,  
          a place to rest my soul,  
       but all I found was empty words,  
     hollow promises that tore me apart.  
      My heart shattered into pieces,  
         breaking with every tear  
            that fell from my  
              tired eyes.  
               Alone in  
              the dark,  
              I reach,  
             but nothing  
            holds me now.  
         The weight of loss  
        pulls me further down,  
      sinking deeper into pain.  
     Every beat feels like  
      a heavy thud, echoing  
        the ache within me.  
          My heart, once  
           whole, is now  
            left broken,  
             in pieces  
              and pain,  
                torn  
                 in  
                 two.  
                  Oh!
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October 2, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Hi Frank, let me extend a belated welcome to PS to you. I have learned so much from PS, from entering the contests and have developed some wonderful, delightful poetry friendships here. I hope that will also be your experience! I really liked the unique creativity of this poem, the shape and the way your words created visceral images. Once again, welcome. Sending you blessings of autumn joy.
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October 4, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Thank you so much Sam, for the warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I am thrilled to be part of such a vibrant and supportive community. Your kind words about my poem mean a lot to me, especially coming from someone who has gained so much from this platform. I look forward to participating in the contests and hope to develop the same wonderful poetry friendships that you have. Your encouragement is truly inspiring, and I am excited to continue sharing my work and learning from all the talented poets here. Wishing you blessings of autumn joy as well!, Frank.
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