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Shattered

I thought love was safe, a place to rest my soul, but all I found was empty words, hollow promises that tore me apart. My heart shattered into pieces, breaking with every tear that fell from my tired eyes. Alone in the dark, I reach, but nothing holds me now. The weight of loss pulls me further down, sinking deeper into pain. Every beat feels like a heavy thud, echoing the ache within me. My heart, once whole, is now left broken, in pieces and pain, torn in two. Oh!

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/2/2024 10:31:00 AM

Hi Frank, let me extend a belated welcome to PS to you. I have learned so much from PS, from entering the contests and have developed some wonderful, delightful poetry friendships here. I hope that will also be your experience! I really liked the unique creativity of this poem, the shape and the way your words created visceral images. Once again, welcome. Sending you blessings of autumn joy.

Frank Mashina
Date: 10/4/2024 1:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Sam, for the warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I am thrilled to be part of such a vibrant and supportive community. Your kind words about my poem mean a lot to me, especially coming from someone who has gained so much from this platform. I look forward to participating in the contests and hope to develop the same wonderful poetry friendships that you have. Your encouragement is truly inspiring, and I am excited to continue sharing my work and learning from all the talented poets here. Wishing you blessings of autumn joy as well!, Frank.