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Shattered

Youth love broken; bitter lament, low earthen floor. Dreamed a dream, dominant image spoken, painful idle no more. Defile taste of the grave-mound as they lie crumbled. Painful overwhelming grief they stand and stumbled. Muddle, confused, down they tumbled; precious memories of love and strength awoken. 6/21/2019 Poetry Contest: Enter the 'Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme' Sponsored By: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/30/2019 4:06:00 PM
Eve , congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Date: 6/29/2019 6:55:00 PM
such painful memories Eve young love is hard to fathom out, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2019 7:54:00 PM
Your poignant pen evokes such striking and sad images, Eve. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/25/2019 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve! Well written verse
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Date: 6/25/2019 11:47:00 AM
very well done, Eve. Congrats for your win, and I'll be seeing you when I get home in several days!
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Date: 6/22/2019 12:02:00 PM
Excellent poem Eve. Well written :)
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