Shatter

Shatter


Scarlet petals they fall
With the iron tracts they leave
Busted on the tears of snow
Coverlet for our memory 

Who else is there to blame
For the silence in the night
The bottle empty of its whisky
Rushes headlong to the wall

But sleepless rests within these trembling hands
To die one more time
As I close my eyes
You never knew its taste upon my lips

And now in the darkness
I can at least see my heart
Iron petal it falls
In scarlet tracts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
this I will not even bother 2 lie and say it is any good. I got the sense U are a sad man do to no 1 cares about your poetry. if you need someone to care write a book about it. I will tell you what. My writes out match yours in a heartbeat. U have no quality as a man 2 B so envious of me or Sweet John. I did enjoy your comment, i needed a pick me up this morning. And yes that did it, if you really are talking about bullies you have not looked in a mirror lately. if the shoe fits stick it, love
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:56:00 AM
Good morning Colin, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. Hope you are enjoying your weekend as much as I am enjoying mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 6:55:00 PM
Colin, your title tells of the sad tale! nice!! jim
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