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Shatter

Shatter Scarlet petals they fall With the iron tracts they leave Busted on the tears of snow Coverlet for our memory Who else is there to blame For the silence in the night The bottle empty of its whisky Rushes headlong to the wall But sleepless rests within these trembling hands To die one more time As I close my eyes You never knew its taste upon my lips And now in the darkness I can at least see my heart Iron petal it falls In scarlet tracts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
this I will not even bother 2 lie and say it is any good. I got the sense U are a sad man do to no 1 cares about your poetry. if you need someone to care write a book about it. I will tell you what. My writes out match yours in a heartbeat. U have no quality as a man 2 B so envious of me or Sweet John. I did enjoy your comment, i needed a pick me up this morning. And yes that did it, if you really are talking about bullies you have not looked in a mirror lately. if the shoe fits stick it, love
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:56:00 AM
Good morning Colin, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. Hope you are enjoying your weekend as much as I am enjoying mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 6:55:00 PM
Colin, your title tells of the sad tale! nice!! jim
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