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Sharp Ivory Brushes

Sharp ivory brushes my torso
Pain, but pleasure’s persistent
A flash of boredom that coinsides
With 
Saliva and other 
Suspitions.
Answers lay just beyond
Splashes of color and
Juxtaposed likenesses
My squealing snout hides me
And my pink flesh exposes
But covered with fiery illusion
From days in a ring of fire
My voice illudes as inconceivable 
As it is
I illogically continue
Desbite negative notions
Thrashing in dark waters
A serpent lies in wait
Biding time, to set me straight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:33:00 PM
Sarah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:02:00 PM
SARAH, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:59:00 AM
Top o the day to you, Sarah, and welcome to poetry soup. Don't know what other websites u have written for or shared your poetry but I believe you will find this a lovely new home! Personification is very tricky and I often have to work at it intensely..could u tell me what object is being personified bc I am a lil slow to catch on. Love some of your phrases..well, let me know. Have a warm and sunny day. Finally NO RAIN! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:22:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry ... hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:42:00 AM
Very interesting.
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:52:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sarah. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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