Shark's Teeth

Too many fish are swimming in the sea of my tranquility ---
Causing me to become incapable of retaining sensibility ---
There are fish approaching me from almost every side ---
Leaving me feeling without protection and nowhere to hide ---
So I will just close my eyes and try to calmly think ---
To lessen the horrible pain, as the shark's teeth begin to sink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/5/2010 11:47:00 AM
gripping and gruesome and been there had to call the evil exterminator
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:49:00 AM
the more they bite the more we swim away. Love the way you use metaphors to describe yourself. Enjoyed,..LeeAnn
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Date: 5/7/2010 10:20:00 AM
oooh, gruesome!!! An interesting read. Yes, maybe if you stayed calm they would not attack. Did you ever see that movie about the couple stuck in an ocean with sharks and finally they just get eaten up? It was pretty dramatic! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/4/2010 11:41:00 PM
Sheol thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:03:00 PM
Can feel the vulnerability. Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:20:00 AM
Very interesting poetry today Sheol. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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