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Pleiades
Only one word is allowed for a title followed by a single 7-line stanza, each line
having 6 to 8 syllables. The first word in each line must start with the same letter as the title.

Swift, agile predators, sharks patrol coral reefs swimming silently and stealthily among the shadows, they pursue prey, surgically culling sick and or injured fish. (Pleiades) 03/18/2022 In Search Of Prey Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/23/2022 6:06:00 AM

Awesome description and write Congratulations on your win. Hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/23/2022 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, Cecilia, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Simon Rogerson

Date: 4/2/2022 6:46:00 AM

The sinister shark so well penned here - congratulations

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:32:00 AM

Thanks, Simon, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2022 3:01:00 AM

Wonderful Emile, so glad I did not choose sharks. Congratulations, well deserved.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 7:06:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2022 8:44:00 PM

Great description, Emile, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings my friend

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 7:06:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/30/2022 7:09:00 PM

Reading again. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 2:51:00 PM

back with my congrats for your well deserved win, Emile. I am so surprised. I am the only person who chose crocodiles, and I read online that they have killed more humans than the other animals that were listed!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 7:01:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, I think crocodiles are too ugly to be likable, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Wendy Watson

Date: 3/30/2022 2:15:00 PM

This read so well, Emile and I'm jolly glad that I'm never likely to meet up with one! Interestingly, I hadn't clicked that there was a specific syllable count for this form- it's not mentioned under the PS definition of this form. A well-deserved win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 6:58:00 AM

Thanks, Wendy, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Joseph May

Date: 3/30/2022 2:05:00 PM

Very nicely penned Emile, , Congrats on your win

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2022 6:57:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the win my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2022 3:46:00 PM

EXCELLENT use of this form, Emile. A big winner for me anyway.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, as always your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/19/2022 9:00:00 AM

I always find this form tricky - enjoyed this very much & I love sharks. Thanks for the place in your contest : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2022 12:00:00 PM

Thanks, Jack, I appreciate your comments but always remember you earned your place in my contest with your talent and poetic skills my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/18/2022 3:25:00 PM

Chilling but true Emile. It is amazing how they can swim in very shallow waters to prey on the unsuspecting. A perfect Pleiades Emile. This should be a top winner. We think about sharks when ever we are in the water here in the tropics. I have never encountered one but we keep aware. Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2022 3:58:00 PM

Thanks, Connie, I don't swim in salt water, so I guess I'm lucky when it comes to sharks, I appreciate the comments my friend, Emile.