Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Shark In the Soup

His fin is at play in my soup... Afraid!
He’ll nibble my fingers and bod with blade!
Ordered the big bowl —
I’ve no self-control.
The waiter will consider check unpaid.

12/26/2018

Sponsor: Anthony Slausin

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Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2018 at 9:22 PM and thanks for that awesome contest you just closed on! I loved the interesting titles you gave us to work on. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 9:33 PM I really appreciate that, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2018 at 9:21 PM GREAT images, Kim. A really fun poem. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 9:33 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Eve Roper December 27, 2018 at 12:17 PM Hahaha.. awesome Limerick , Kim. Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year! Hugs Eve~`* Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 4:46 PM Thank you, Eve! Glad it tickled your funny bone :)

Chris Green December 27, 2018 at 8:21 AM Haven't you heard, you shouldn't play with your food? :) This was fun Kim. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 9:32 AM LOL, right?!

Mystic Rose Rose December 27, 2018 at 6:14 AM You never know what at the bottom of a big bowl of soup lol, very creative work Kim, ps thank you for my placement, I was honored, Hope your Christmas was a nice one, hugs Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 6:45 AM You’re welcome, Pixie!

Caren Krutsinger December 26, 2018 at 11:55 PM Hilarious that you are not planning on paying, Kim. I wonder if anyone else thought of that? Very clever.Good luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 6:44 AM The other interpretation, Caren, is that the shark...

Carolyn Devonshire December 26, 2018 at 10:29 PM :) Wonder if there's a great white shark in that big bowl. Funny, Kim. Best wishes in Anthony's contest. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 6:44 AM Thank you, Carolyn! :) We all wonder...lol