Shark

 Stealthy, deadly hunter
 Swiftly moves beneath waves
 Searching for its next meal
 Swimmers become its prey
 Surfers are attacked too
 Sharp teeth cut like razor
 So beware of those Jaws!!

seapleiades

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Brandy Nicole

February 23, 2024 at 6:35 PM

Yes, sharks are swift and always searching. Being in the water is enjoyable, yet frightening all at the same time. Every letter beginning with ' S ' is very creative. I enjoyed that. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Silent One

February 21, 2024 at 12:20 PM

I have always been traumatised since watching jaws as a child.. my mum did tell me there is no water around here... but it really made me scared lol.. Good to say i have grown up since...

Paula Goldsmith

February 21, 2024 at 11:13 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Shark" write. Dinner is on when you play in their backyard... Have a great day writing away......................

Vijay Pandit

February 21, 2024 at 4:51 AM

Fine weaving of S words, Joseph. You described the shark perfectly.

Ink Empress

February 21, 2024 at 3:37 AM

Ah love this dear joseph. Made me think of my experiences with sharks here in maldives. They are usually friendly and never attacks swimmers. And during the lockdown, when i stayed in water room, i befriended some, they would always come at night cus i used to feed them. And we have many sharks even in shallow waters but they are friendly. But i know most sharks around the world arent the same family. Brilliant one! I loved this!

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2024 at 4:00 PM

Wow you did this form really well with this shark poem

Hilda Greenhough

February 20, 2024 at 3:20 PM

This is an exciting poem about a ruthless predator that kills people but that everyone seems to love. Poem is a good reference to the movie JAWS. It's a very good poem.