Shark

Shark 29 March 2022 Suddenly appearing, Swimming closer to you, Slowly it circles you, Surrounding you in blue, Sharp teeth, gray skin, black eyes, Sand flies; it disappears! Swirling blue sea left now.

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Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2022 3:23:00 AM

My favourite in this contest, so well written using the form so eloquently, congratulations.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2022 9:03:00 PM

Great description of the Shark, Mckynzie, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/30/2022 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful description. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:03:00 PM

I think this one is very cohesive. I love how the lines flow together, which is not easy to do with this form. GREAT job. Congrats for your win.

Joseph May

Date: 3/30/2022 2:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win Mckynzie, Nicely penned

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/30/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.