Mckynzie Finney Poet Pleiades

Shark

Shark                                                       29 March 2022                                                                                                                       

Suddenly appearing,
Swimming closer to you, 
Slowly it circles you, 
Surrounding you in blue,
Sharp teeth, gray skin, black eyes, 
Sand flies; it disappears!
Swirling blue sea left now.

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Terry Miller March 31, 2022 at 3:23 AM My favourite in this contest, so well written using the form so eloquently, congratulations.

Eve Roper March 30, 2022 at 9:03 PM Great description of the Shark, Mckynzie, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings

Christuraj Alex March 30, 2022 at 7:30 PM Beautiful description. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2022 at 3:03 PM I think this one is very cohesive. I love how the lines flow together, which is not easy to do with this form. GREAT job. Congrats for your win.

Joseph May March 30, 2022 at 2:28 PM Congrats on your win Mckynzie, Nicely penned

Beata Agustin March 30, 2022 at 7:57 AM Thanks for sharing this... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.