Shark

Slow sways, it meanders ~ Sandy spotted mammoth Sieving the shallow sea… Still that dorsal fin fear! Some jaws don’t bite or bark Such is deep’s largest fish… Sized gape, my whale shark awe ~ (3/27/22)

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/1/2022 9:17:00 PM

Superb description, Susan. Congratulations! Brian

Susan Woodrow
Date: 4/2/2022 9:45:00 PM

thank you :)

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2022 3:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/31/2022 9:36:00 AM

thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2022 9:06:00 PM

Great description of the Shark, Susan, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings my friend

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/31/2022 9:36:00 AM

thank you :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/30/2022 7:35:00 PM

Clear description of the monster (a true nature beauty). Congratulations!

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2022 7:51:00 PM

thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:06:00 PM

back with my congrats, Susan. Soon to go check Kimo wins!! if I have time.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2022 7:05:00 PM

thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:06:00 PM

haha, the captcha was sht. Never saw that one before.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2022 7:04:00 PM

lol! precisely what one would say if facing a shark haha

Joseph May

Date: 3/30/2022 2:31:00 PM

Very nicely done Susan Congrats on your win

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2022 7:04:00 PM

thank you for the inspiration :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 3:01:00 PM

Love how you did yours, Susan. Creative imagery.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/30/2022 7:03:00 PM

thanks Andrea :)

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2022 3:39:00 AM

Nice use of the letter S, you do this form so well..

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/28/2022 7:08:00 AM

Thank you :)