Susan Woodrow Poet Pleiades

Shark

Slow sways, it meanders ~
Sandy spotted mammoth
Sieving the shallow sea…
Still that dorsal fin fear!
Some jaws don’t bite or bark
Such is deep’s largest fish…
Sized gape, my whale shark awe ~

(3/27/22)

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Brian Sambourne April 1, 2022 at 9:17 PM Superb description, Susan. Congratulations! Brian Susan Woodrow April 2, 2022 at 9:45 PM thank you :)

Terry Miller March 31, 2022 at 3:27 AM Congratulations on your win. Susan Woodrow March 31, 2022 at 9:36 AM thank you :)

Eve Roper March 30, 2022 at 9:06 PM Great description of the Shark, Susan, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings my friend Susan Woodrow March 31, 2022 at 9:36 AM thank you :)

Christuraj Alex March 30, 2022 at 7:35 PM Clear description of the monster (a true nature beauty). Congratulations! Susan Woodrow March 30, 2022 at 7:51 PM thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2022 at 3:06 PM back with my congrats, Susan. Soon to go check Kimo wins!! if I have time. Susan Woodrow March 30, 2022 at 7:05 PM thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2022 at 3:06 PM haha, the captcha was sht. Never saw that one before. Susan Woodrow March 30, 2022 at 7:04 PM lol! precisely what one would say if facing a shark haha

Joseph May March 30, 2022 at 2:31 PM Very nicely done Susan Congrats on your win Susan Woodrow March 30, 2022 at 7:04 PM thank you for the inspiration :)

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2022 at 3:01 PM Love how you did yours, Susan. Creative imagery. Susan Woodrow March 30, 2022 at 7:03 PM thanks Andrea :)

Silent One March 28, 2022 at 3:39 AM Nice use of the letter S, you do this form so well.. Susan Woodrow March 28, 2022 at 7:08 AM Thank you :)