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Sharing the Promise

Something spoke a promise Whispered by the sky And nodding clouds then passed it on To eagles flying high Something told the meadow And gave the sparrow song Who sang it to the cottontail Who spread the warmth along The trees soon got the message And swayed with new delight The raindrops danced in evening breeze And shared it through the night Each lily and fair flower Stood taller on the stem The promise shared when darkness came ........The sun will rise again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2017 10:31:00 AM
I really love this poem of hope! So glad it was featured or I never would have found your poetry.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/23/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite! I had almost forgotten about this older poem, one I wrote when I first started writing and discovered Poetry Soup. It seems so long ago :) I was surprised to see it featured !! Thanks for stopping by ! :)
Date: 8/7/2009 7:50:00 AM
if only man could learn to share in the promise that God made to us. thank you so much for your comments and word of encouragement for my poem "The Matriarch". p.s. I'm not 80, I wrote that piece for a church member.
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Date: 7/27/2009 10:33:00 AM
beautiful write--charma
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Date: 7/26/2009 8:03:00 PM
I read it once, but I was occupied. On my second read, it caught me by surprise. It's now my one of my favorites. This is a promise I'd like to remember.
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Date: 7/26/2009 4:06:00 PM
Such an inspirational poem, flowing like music and lets the heart soar. Beautiful. Love Heidie
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