Michael Degenhardt Poet Quatrain

Sharing My Bowl of Soup

The list of ingredients is far too big
But know this, the soup turns out fine 
For the people that stir it, they’re marvelous
And they’re friends that I like to call mine

In fact they’re the reason the soup is perfect
They stir it, they heat it and they are it
So come take a bowl of the soup I adore
And perhaps you’ll also be a part of it

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Heidie Buys August 12, 2008 at 4:35 PM The secret is that variety is the spice of life and we sure have variety and even spice in this soup. A fun write, good one. Regards Heidie

August 12, 2008 at 12:56 PM I assume you are talking about our writing community with this creative poem. I like the way you weave your message through the lines. I love being part of The Soup. I'm sure you do too. Thank you for sharing this uplifting piece with us and for your kind comment. Karen

James Foulk August 11, 2008 at 12:08 PM this poem made me want to go have a bowl of soup, this was a very thoughtful and warm poem.

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 11, 2008 at 9:21 AM It's the variety of ingredients that makes it special. Vince

Carrie Richards August 11, 2008 at 9:09 AM If I have to be boiled in a pot of soup, no better company to be in, than all of you! Spicy, warm, healthy, and comforting!! Yummy soup, indeed! ......Carrie

Kristin Reynolds August 11, 2008 at 6:44 AM YAY - awesome little ditty, and you are just the right ingrediant for this fine soup! Love Kristin

Michael Jordan August 11, 2008 at 5:33 AM Great job Michael - We are all part of this bowl of soup - God Bless my friend