sharing

pounding 
grinding 
drilling
sawdust
plumbing scraps
empty boxes 
strewn from 
bedroom to bathroom
and everywhere in between ...
a miner's shanty once
propped up 
on timbers with 
no firm foundation ...
that's okay
jack it up
pour a footer
it has one now
reroofed, rewired, re-plumbed
remodeled 
renovated 
and added onto 
more than once
it was never
big enough
when it wasn't 
just me to love
now I need smaller spaces
to snuggle up into
like my suv a.k.a "campmobile"
the rv I sold
the fishing boat 
where I spent
Alaskan summers 
yeah...
so... split it 
in two
her half is big
light 
and airy
my half is minimal
dark and quaint
her art, her birds,
her cat, and her dog
fill her space
my space I 
don't like sharing
thus the divider and
kitchen I'm building
I'm also fencing her dog out
of my backyard
the laundry's all we'll 
share
stylish as she is 
her vintage isn't
washed that often
(or it's when I'm gone)
as for me, I sneak into 
our common kitchen
say hi, use the microwave
and pet her kitty 
but I'm mostly gone
and she doesn't like it
when I'm away
says she feels safer
when I'm here
young introvert
who tends bar
plays games
and burns lights 24/7
that's okay
(she pays for it)
yeah, the pounding, 
grinding and drilling ...
they're almost through
I'll be soon
washing my own dishes
and missing her kitty

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Date: 3/25/2024 12:51:00 PM
Your poem subtly explores themes of identity, solitude, and connection, as the occupants navigate their individual spaces within the shared context. While the physical renovations near completion, the emotional journey of adaptation and mutual acceptance continues, symbolized by the narrator's impending transition to doing his own dishes and the acknowledgment of missing his roommate's kitty.
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Steven Young
Date: 4/7/2024 12:33:00 PM
Yeah ...always exploring. Like T. S. Elliot said: We shall not cease from exploration And the end of all our exploring Will be to arrive where we started And know the place for the first time. Without exploration, stuff would end. Thank you so much for reading and sharing such insight. It means a lot to me.
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