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One lopes through 
his dense tree occupied domain,
  thinly dappled,dispersed stripes 
                     gleaming,
    dully on a soft fur coat,
  tongue lolling lazily in and out of
           a pearl toothed mouth

   Another careens widely across
       her vivid fields green fields
               wind flapping back
                     watchful ears,
             screeching to a stop to
                          sniff and 
                hone in on the scent 
                of a shivering quarry,
               jet black fur shining in
                           blazing light

               the last scampers neatly on
                       swift toes through
             his unknown vine-tangled trails ,
                   ever exploring the lands
               beyond his own vast territory,
                 unveiling whatever remains
                   covert to his curios mind

                  My dogs seem out of place
                                 in my backyard

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Date: 4/20/2016 1:09:00 AM
Ryan Chase, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:18:00 PM
Ryan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:27:00 PM
Hi Ryan, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:17:00 PM
Ryan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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