Share the Same Fate

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If you should notice any spelling or grammatical errors...PLEASE...point them out to me, as I am compiling these poems for my new book. Thank you, Emile.

He struggles with the words, and she can tell fake emotions are attached to each one. For tears immediately start to swell as he confesses to the damage done. Crocodile tears declare his heart is broke, crushed by a mix of guilt and second thoughts. But the dream’s over; it’s time she awoke and started connecting the trail of dots. The feel of remorse, like an aching hurt lends believability to his words. And yet, this wasn’t an innocent flirt, and so she frees him, to fly like the birds. Lost love doesn’t have to morph into hate when disillusioned hearts share the same fate. (Sonnet) July 22, 2018

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Lyric Man

Date: 7/22/2018 10:35:00 PM

Emile, the write is as beautiful as the story line. I have broken off a relationship that crushed me. We were not a fit but telling her that hurt so bad because I truly loved her!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/22/2018 2:23:00 PM

Well penned, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/22/2018 10:03:00 AM

Two things we know for certain. Nothing lasts forever. Change is perpetual.. I like what have written here, Emile. How does one get from love to hate?

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2018 10:29:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.