Shards

you glance back at what you created
the tower taller and nearer
it shines in the sun and glows in the dark
it’s where the fire began with a spark

you whistle a tune and some come running
smiling their smiles and dancing to your tune
but I do neither and turn my back
picking up speed and tightening the slack

you call for me, but I can’t hear
a white noise hums inside my head
what was true and built to last
shatters like many shards of glass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 10, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Dang. Thee Most INTESIVE READ IN A LONG. LONG WHILE. excellent, I have a poem called "fairytale Prison" with the mention of shards but nowhere compares to your usage in my eyes. THANK YOU for sharing, Lucinda re: Journey
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