Shaping Sounds of Love

(Unrhymed Tercets followed by 9-line stanzas.
Co-written with someone close to my heart) 


Morning Tulips opening petals shaping sounds
Dancing a slow ballade to your rising melody
With burning passion entering my desire 

Warm drinking golden thoughts
Tasting one beautiful wine
A slender soft kiss dragging away clouds
The amazing beauty of it shines
Holding a soul through your eyes inside vision
Parting lips kiss gate opening honey
Crashing feelings in an ocean wave of emotions
Touching golden sunshine smiles
All over warmly lovingly the treasure in you

You fulfill me with all of you… skin on skin
Hands clasping hands, lips on lips, hips on hips
Rise and fall we come together as one united soul

In destiny it's a dream we're all seeking
Silk ivory pearl rainbow luster
Voices of two souls' duet floating in the mist
As the seashell opens gasping beautiful pearl 
Treasure of the century as ones eyes moistly glisten 
Drumbeats begin the echo of the bloods passion beat 
Slowly planting a seed inside the chamber which holds love 
Gasping sighs as one kiss intensifies the tempo 
Desires plugged together melting hot inside you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/17/2016 3:20:00 PM
very beautifully painted co write angeline
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 11/24/2016 1:49:00 AM
Thank you kindly for visiting and commenting.
Date: 11/2/2016 1:26:00 PM
Such an enchanting and mesmerizing piece that obviously is written with a deep and beautiful love. Bravo to both of you. Good love poems are so hard to find anymore, I am happy I found yours.
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 11/10/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thank you kindly
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