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Shaping Haven's Orb

With the gentle compassion of maternal nurturing
A benevolent deity weeps over the world’s dismal state
While mesmerizing melodies sway to the dance of life
Her heart beats to the eloquence of universal love
Buoyant whispers riding over gossamer clouds on the run
Breathing hope into dreams of an auspicious sanctuary



AP: 1st place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Devonshire Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 12:43 PM
A stunningly beautiful write! I especially like the imagery in "Buoyant whispers riding over gossamer clouds..." Best wishes in the contest, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Carolyn ~
Somadas Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 2:54 AM
Wonderful write Line.. mesmerizing melodies sway to the dance of life..
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish ~
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