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With the gentle compassion of maternal nurturing A benevolent deity weeps over the world’s dismal state While mesmerizing melodies sway to the dance of life Her heart beats to the eloquence of universal love Buoyant whispers riding over gossamer clouds on the run Breathing hope into dreams of an auspicious sanctuary AP: 1st place 2020 Posted on August 16, 2020

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Date: 8/16/2020 12:43:00 PM
A stunningly beautiful write! I especially like the imagery in "Buoyant whispers riding over gossamer clouds..." Best wishes in the contest, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Carolyn ~
Date: 8/16/2020 2:54:00 AM
Wonderful write Line.. mesmerizing melodies sway to the dance of life..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish ~

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