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Shapes of Smoke Premiere Contest Winner

His fragile limbs in a caged body seeking proteins from ivy drips vulnerable fears hushed by whirring darkness paranoia draped in wavering existence of malady sea of sick humans hanging like leaves from willow mitigated by prayers of angels in white coats yet lowered pulse rate in hopeful daylight but his sumptuous mind holds the key to freedom in deepest slumber his twisted cage breaks free arising hopes float in ropes of subconscious mist his smiling shadow traces whispers of memories he sways his brittle fingers in ecstasy shapes of smoke growing as titans in silence his love is a ghost that the others can't see exploding stars in topaz lit utopia paint charcoal brush adorning sparkling bristles of love colourful patterns on canvas of blank memory flashing waves entrancing visions of kisses alight blankets of amnesia in existence but he dances on a hustling vintage platform emerging in fog breeze in his red shirt chasing scarlet sunsets he boards a crimson wagon longing for a journey holding roses for Aphrodite in the land of swans simmering in flashes of blooming glitters. Rising dawn clicks the buttons in his mind blank memories, ivy drips lock him away in a caged body his fragile limbs rest nobody knows he visits a soothing paradise fog curls under his pillow in deep oceans till slithering hazy sapphire nights arrive July 20, 2020 Delirium Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann ~Premiere Contest Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 8/3/2020 5:42:00 AM
Another shining example of the power imagination and creativity my friend. I am saving this in my FAVES. BIG congrats on your trophy win, Aditi.
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Date: 8/1/2020 2:47:00 AM
You never fail us dear Aditi. How boundless your poems ~ I cannot fathom. You are a gift on us. Thank you so much and congratulations for another smash win!!!...Another fave!
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Date: 7/31/2020 7:25:00 PM
Great visuals resonates, Aditi, with such fantastic know how, Congrats my friend, Aloha! William
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Date: 7/31/2020 10:15:00 AM
Back with heartiest congrats for your well-deserved 1st place win with this gem, Aditi:-)
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Date: 7/31/2020 9:39:00 AM
I must say, this is very descriptive and you have an overwhelming gift. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/31/2020 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations. An epic delirium.
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Date: 7/21/2020 10:48:00 PM
Ah, so delicately done. " he boards a crimson wagon longing for a journey holding roses for Aphrodite in the land of swans" is my favorite part.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:25:00 AM
Glad you love my muse Caren. Thank you for appreciating :) Much love!
Date: 7/19/2020 7:07:00 PM
"shapes of smoke growing as titans in silence"...I love that line! Stunning poetry, Aditi:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:25:00 AM
Thank you for such generous appreciation dear friend! :)

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