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Premiere Contest WinnerShapes of Smoke


   His fragile limbs in a caged body 
    seeking proteins from ivy drips
     vulnerable fears hushed by whirring darkness
      paranoia draped in wavering existence of malady
       sea of sick humans hanging like leaves from willow
      mitigated by prayers of angels in white coats
    yet lowered pulse rate in hopeful daylight
   but his sumptuous mind holds the key to freedom
    in deepest slumber his twisted cage breaks free
     arising hopes float in ropes of subconscious mist
      his smiling shadow traces whispers of memories
        he sways his brittle fingers in ecstasy 
          shapes of smoke growing as titans in silence
            his love is a ghost that the others can't see
              exploding stars in topaz lit utopia paint
               charcoal brush adorning sparkling bristles of love
               colourful patterns on canvas of blank memory
              flashing waves entrancing visions of kisses alight
             blankets of amnesia in existence but he dances
           on a hustling vintage platform emerging in fog
         breeze in his red shirt chasing scarlet sunsets
        he boards a crimson wagon longing for a journey
      holding roses for Aphrodite in the land of swans
     simmering in flashes of blooming glitters.
      Rising dawn clicks the buttons in his mind
       blank memories, ivy drips lock him away
         in a caged body his fragile limbs rest
          nobody knows he visits a soothing paradise 
           fog curls under his pillow in deep oceans
         till slithering hazy sapphire nights arrive


July 20, 2020

Delirium Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann
~Premiere Contest Winner: 1st Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pandit Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Another shining example of the power imagination and creativity my friend. I am saving this in my FAVES. BIG congrats on your trophy win, Aditi.
Brul Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 2:47 AM
You never fail us dear Aditi. How boundless your poems ~ I cannot fathom. You are a gift on us. Thank you so much and congratulations for another smash win!!!...Another fave!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 7:25 PM
Great visuals resonates, Aditi, with such fantastic know how, Congrats my friend, Aloha! William
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Back with heartiest congrats for your well-deserved 1st place win with this gem, Aditi:-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 9:39 AM
I must say, this is very descriptive and you have an overwhelming gift. Congratulations.
Neumann Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations. An epic delirium.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 10:48 PM
Ah, so delicately done. " he boards a crimson wagon longing for a journey holding roses for Aphrodite in the land of swans" is my favorite part.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Glad you love my muse Caren. Thank you for appreciating :) Much love!
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:07 PM
"shapes of smoke growing as titans in silence"...I love that line! Stunning poetry, Aditi:-)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Thank you for such generous appreciation dear friend! :)
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