Shapes of Hearts

Crescent adrift
      skipper its sails
                     hearts pursues
             eclipse squalls
          lost treasures
                              alit silhouettes

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Andrea Dietrich

October 5, 2025 at 2:26 PM

Really nice images. Was it for a contest. I completely forgot to post my poem for Edward Ibeh's contest and now it's closed. I am kicking myself.

William Kelii Kekaula

October 5, 2025 at 3:42 PM

It’s Lines, 6-line, objectives of Less Said. Of the lattermost, I did that as I’m not pleased with my entry, c’est la vie.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 4, 2025 at 2:47 PM

Hello HP, I love the feeling of being Crescent adrift and the idea of a heart having to skipper its sails. The eclipse squalls really captures the feeling of a sudden emotional challenge, followed by finding those alit silhouettes. Beautifully haunting work, as always. Autumn Blessings, HP, Daniel

William Kelii Kekaula

October 4, 2025 at 3:39 PM

Aristotle imagined humanity having three things: “Life, death, and the sea.” Our fate is cast shoreless in want of a compass to complete our inner deformities amidst bedlam; hope, that is found in others, shines a new sea. Aloha, my friend.