Shape Shifting Soul

I love this poem and your lines that rhyme. Your shape shifting soul travels 'towards paths that never end' Deja vu has been experienced by many on planet earth, but 'this form is only flesh and bone contents'. Whereas It is one's spirit that 'attempts to transcend farther above twilight's galactic gloam.' Very lovely poem. Silent one, my last poem was not for a contest. Blessings, Jennifer.

Congratulations are in order, so it seems. I don't know what contest, but way to go on this winner. Thanks for sharing your past life with us. Sara K

congrats S, loved it from the start !

Without waxing eloquent or growing tedious, you have hit the nail on the head and the poetic form chosen suits the subject so well or you have made the form to suit your line of thoughts. Lovely poem comprising all elements, the lines of enquiry postulate. The flashbacks of previous experiences and the feel of Deja vu as you confront today's experience suggest that the shape shifting soul is in an on going process of change and 'continues to travel towards paths that never end'. The brevity and depth of this poem is so remarkable. Into my Fave.

Love this, SO. I really like when you do form poetry like this.

A celestial glow, this piece, S , prompting readers to ponder on your POV... sweet congrats on your fine winning streak ,and thanks for coming around my neighborhood! blessings

Very true words spoken. Beautifully crafted. checks a tick for a saying " Deja Vu is a flash of a life we once lived before." Flashbacks flicker of images unknown, wandering in gardens of cosmic scents."

A beautifully written Dizain, indeed you are a Master of many a form and this is no exception, love the line of inquiry, made for a great poetic reflection. Good luck in the contest dear S1...Hugs

Ah, the mystic poet traveling through time and space in thoughtful images of "gardens of cosmic events" as "flashbacks flicker!" SO, every line is a journey into deja vu as the "soft soul travels "galactic gloam!" You have so wonderfully nailed down the theme! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for your journey!

SO, Ahh to dream that we could go on forever. You make it sound enchanting. As a secularist, I love reading a piece such as this and it tempts me to change my philosophical bent. It's very charming indeed!

There is much mystery in the mind of our universe Silent one! Your lines capture a process of thought which provokes and enlightens!! I loved it!

Dear Silent One, absolutely mesmerizing! I felt a strong sense of being on the cosmic journey and spiritual transcendence with you. I really loved your use of words and phrasing in this Dizain. Truly captivating and thought-provoking. If it is for a contest, I wish you the best of luck. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Neat. Had to type characters in window. They were HRN. Do you remember me? Check out my Willie Mays poem.

A very well done Dizain S, on a subject you seem to know much of. Thank you for your knowledge and your poetry today, have a good one !

This is so deeply meaningful dear silent one, I absolutely love where you took the prompt. I do have those dejavu moments where i feel like somethings did happen previously somewhere. I believe in another time and place too flowers did dance for you, especially dahlias, inspiring you to write such creative and profound writes! How beautifully youv expressed in the form of dizain! This inspired me but the contest is now closed! And i am sure this will score high! I love the cadence and rhythm. Your way with rhymes always is so very captivating and impressive! Authentically just you! Nailed it silent one! Best wishes

Very nice, Silent!

is it all an illusion or a dreamer's wish? life is eternal, not our life rather life on an unimaginable scale, whether it be as small as an atom or as vast as the universe, life never dies it changes into another form of energy that creates more life in a continuous string of dimensions...my thought

"Soft soul knows this is no permanent home, yearning to return where it once did roam." my fav line! beautifully evokes a nostalgic longing for a higher realm of existence, a soul's eternal want for its true home.

Hey, this is very cosmic and mystical- I know there's more out there, beautifully written