Shame, Guilt, Hate, Sorrow

All I feel inside is shame,
Guilt, hate sorrow, and even more blame.
Once I fall in love it’s forever.
I ask for a break, but my heart says never.
I just don’t know how to move away,
From the love for the person who’ll never say,
“I love you,” ever again.
I wish that this love would just end.
I don’t want it turn to hate.
I love you, Darling. Is this just fate?
All I feel inside is shame,
Guilt, hate, sorrow, and even more blame.
But to move on is what I have to do,
But my question is with who?
Who could take my heart from your hands?
Somewhere in this world he stands.
He can take away the shame,
The guilt, hate, sorrow, and even more blame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/7/2010 10:06:00 AM
This one has good rhyme and flow. If it is life and not just a topic, you have to forgive yourself and move on then the right person will come along. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2010 9:40:00 AM
Read like a story indeed... also loved the end and have a great day. :):)
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