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Shambles

“Let me rant and let me ramble, you’re looking at a lunatic in shambles.” ~' Let me be' by The Mighty Mighty BossTones Do you ever feel hot, palms sweating? your hands and feet burning your heart benumbed and yet, you feel a chill running through your body. When you look back and see mostly an uneventful life and see only a foreboding haze ahead? When all the religions and the scriptures all the philosophical treaties and all the political maneuvering, The social and moral proprieties that you adhered to all your life now seems to appear nothing but a farce. All the passions and the obsessions the ideals and the ambitions of your life they all come roaring back like the waves of the sea at high tide and then quietly recede leaving behind a troubled and cynical soul in shambles. ~04/09/23 ~Contest: Writing Challenge 'S' words ~Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/12/2023 10:28:00 AM
Abdul, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, love the quote, congratulations !
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Abdul :) -
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