Shallow Waters

While I explore
the deep blue sea 
Im unaware
of all the dangers passing me
there you see me
swimming by
evil lurks in your eye
hollowed by a hunger
you wish to feed
a mission 
you soon succeed
now back where I belong 
I come back weak 
when I thought
I'd be strong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week KY. Love, Carol
Gatchell Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:35 PM
thank you lots ^-^
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