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Shallow Waters

The heart is a fragile gift; When it is broken, it can never be fully fixed, And everytime it becomes whole again, We cannot help but wonder when It will fall to pieces once more. Something precious hides in the core, Solitude will protect its holes; No way out unless we crawl, Then once again we find a fault That will turn the valleys winter cold; Like a shadow, it haunts us. Torment Bleeds our soul; alters the scent; Hurts the body; controls the mind. It forces us to cross the line Into what is false and deceitful; Where shallow waters drown the fool That dared to break a heart in two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/4/2008 5:50:00 AM
Wow you are a very profound poetess - I just love your work for it speaks to my spiritual side - Very truthful therefor powerful are your words - I'm so glad I stopped by your poems - Are you new? - I'm sure I would have remembered your work - I looked and you joined while I was on my treatments and rather ill - at any rate it's sure a pleasure to meet you now - God Bless
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