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Shallow Stream

mountain breeze whisper's sweet in the mesquite trees skies of blue cloudless, too once a perfect day memories fade as love wades across a shallow stream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/17/2010 4:29:00 PM
Wow, so visual...and an immense amount of feeling...great poem.
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:49:00 PM
a small number of words describing a very large picture of life ... loved it and thank you, chuck
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