Shallow Stream

mountain breeze
whisper's sweet
in the mesquite trees

skies of blue
cloudless, too
once a perfect day

memories fade
as love wades
across a shallow stream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Wow, so visual...and an immense amount of feeling...great poem.
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May 17, 2010 at 12:49 PM
a small number of words describing a very large picture of life ... loved it and thank you, chuck
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