Shallow Graves

Men march forth
Like fodder falling in shallow graves
No one wins a war
No one counts graves
Lift your sword high and mighty
If you are not the undergrowth of the lost
Your victory is to return home
Your Duty however has drastically changed
Teach us, both young and old
Both rich and poor
The value of those lost souls
Buried in shallow graves



Inspired by a friend and his grandmother on Memorial Day
I hope the Grandmother gets to read this and see how small deeds make us all remember!
Thank you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/26/2015 4:46:00 PM
Deep write Arthur,. Hope you had a wonderful Memorial. love ~SKAT!~
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:34:00 AM
So much truth in your great write my friend! Bravo!!!!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2014 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Robert, much appreciated.
Date: 5/30/2014 5:33:00 PM
This is very touching, Arthur. In addition to reminding us of our war heroes, I wish the men who returned from war would also spread the word that we need peace if mankind is to survive. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/3/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, and I have good news, there are many who do, often we dont hear of them, so here is an exception, someone who truly cares about making this world a better place. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rom%C3%A9o_Dallaire
Date: 5/29/2014 5:34:00 PM
This is a hard one to answer. For me it seems like such a waste yet I do not wish to diminish their sacrifice.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 8:59:00 PM
Well I think if more soldiers became leaders, we would have less wars. Roméo Dallaire, comes to mind, a Great Canadian, in my humble opinion.
Date: 5/27/2014 1:42:00 PM
short but speaks of volumes.. :) this a good tribute for all those heroes famous or not (the soldiers), and also to my grandfather who was a Soldier during the world war 2.... ....... GBU Art
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 9:00:00 PM
Yes, I had a great uncle used to tell me stories when I was a kid, if we listen , we have so much to learn from elders!
Date: 5/27/2014 12:37:00 PM
Great write Arthur For this day. I have two nephews that were born on Memorial Day. Have a blessed day.... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 9:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Lucilla
Date: 5/26/2014 10:07:00 PM
this is a wonderful post for memorial Day. Very good lesson in it too.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea
Date: 5/26/2014 9:06:00 AM
After battles have been fought, lost and won, only remembrance can afford to 'fight' another day!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 9:42:00 PM
So true, thanks Paul
Date: 5/26/2014 5:09:00 AM
Victory is to return home, This so rings home Arthur...Tim
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/29/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot Tim, Cheers!
Date: 5/25/2014 11:24:00 PM
Very nice poem but very sad...Noelle
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/25/2014 11:31:00 PM
Thank you. Sad is my middle name
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