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Shallow Breathing

When a volcano erupts, it can blow your mind The most spectacular event but scary most find Living's our top priority Have it on good authority Alternately, breathing shallow is also quite fine

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/14/2017 2:51:00 PM

If that is th only breath than grab it.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 3:21:00 PM

It's better than NO breath... or is it? LOL Lovesies! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/14/2017 8:27:00 AM

Breathing is hardly rated//Until it has abated//then most would agree//it's priority//number one among the ill fated. (?) MO COFFEE!!! BREATH ON SANTA JACK!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 3:22:00 PM

BTW! How many of those coffees do you down???

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 5:59:00 AM

This is so true, living near an active volcano is scary, you never know when it will just go crazy! This is an excellent write my friend! I have been delighted by your masterful piece here this morning! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2017 6:07:00 AM

Not for me... I enjoy this breathing stuff too much!!! HAVE A GOOD ONE MY FRIEND!!!