Shallow Breathing

When a volcano erupts, it can blow your mind The most spectacular event but scary most find Living's our top priority Have it on good authority Alternately, breathing shallow is also quite fine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:51 PM
If that is th only breath than grab it.
Ellison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:21 PM
It's better than NO breath... or is it? LOL Lovesies! xxx
Flats Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Breathing is hardly rated//Until it has abated//then most would agree//it's priority//number one among the ill fated. (?) MO COFFEE!!! BREATH ON SANTA JACK!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:22 PM
BTW! How many of those coffees do you down???
Sivey Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 5:59 AM
This is so true, living near an active volcano is scary, you never know when it will just go crazy! This is an excellent write my friend! I have been delighted by your masterful piece here this morning! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Not for me... I enjoy this breathing stuff too much!!! HAVE A GOOD ONE MY FRIEND!!!
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