Shallow

You should be an interior
decorator in an insane asylum

your colors don't match
your words don't match

I see your mouth move
but it drones vanilla
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 16, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Well, I actually like vanilla, but not in this poem. Some people really suck ~lol~ ! Nice work Ron. Love, Shar
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March 15, 2009 at 9:45 PM
Powerfully emotional in just a few lines. Excellent! Loving your writing more and more! Smiles from Lolita
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