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Shall We

SHALL WE Change the stroke of our ink And blame the gods for our misfortune? Or rage in blood until our eyes lose the meaning of blink To deprive the unborn ones of the meaning, Fortune? SHALL WE Smile in unison to pretend it never happened And walk with rolled up sleeves to continue our daily lives Truly we've never felt this dampened But have we also lost our gut to comfort the ones we call our wives? SHALL WE Pretend we're invalid to poetry And let our tears explain them to us Just to seek sanctuary in a place That makes us believe That someday WE SHALL

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/20/2024 9:57:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2020 6:59:00 AM

No one is invalid to poetry, write how your heart desires...

Babatunde Hameed
Date: 11/9/2020 8:44:00 AM

Absolutely no one is Invalid to poetry. That's why i said 'Pretend'. Thanks for the comment I really appreciate it