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Shake, Rattle, and Roll

I felt the ground move 
did you feel the earthquake too?
shake, rattle, and roll

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Paul Callus

April 22, 2020 at 2:20 PM

On reading the title I thought it was going to be a percussion paradise...and I was not far off the mark. Bill Haley & his Comets also comes to mind! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

January 26, 2020 at 8:46 AM

Hi Richard, This poem can be interpreted in many ways I woulds say you are on the merry go round of life! Blessings, May I please use your Quoth the Raven in my next super heroes poems, I have got permission from three other poets, but I would like to mention yours as well. if I may? Jennifer.

David William Breidenthal

November 24, 2019 at 1:41 AM

Super silly and clever.poem! -JWE

Brenda Chiri

November 9, 2019 at 12:48 AM

Lol very nicely done! I truly enjoyed this!;)

Quoth Theraven

October 12, 2019 at 12:44 AM

Ann, I choose the romantic spin, if I had a choice. Thanks anyway, and enjoy the day. -Richard

Ann Foster

October 11, 2019 at 5:36 PM

I put a romantic spin, a crazy spin and then a panic spin on this. I read it all the different ways. Wonderful fun. Ann

Alkas Poetry

August 5, 2019 at 5:53 AM

Good times, old times... impressive work dear poet, salute alkas

Funom Makama

July 30, 2019 at 1:22 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Kurt Ravidas

July 23, 2019 at 2:41 PM

There was a time I felt it almost every day, but luckily it was more like shiver, oscillate and sway) Nicely penned, QtR. Wish you solid ground under your feet.

Gershon Wolf

July 14, 2019 at 6:58 PM

Nice use of the lyric line in this one, Raven... Of course, rock'n'roll is one thing, while earthquakes are quite another... :) gw

Quoth Theraven

July 14, 2019 at 12:03 AM

Richard, Unfortunately, I suffer from ED. Earthquake Dysfunction. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux

July 11, 2019 at 10:32 AM

I usually only experience that in the throes of passion. ;0)

Panagiota Romios

July 8, 2019 at 11:23 AM

Hi Richard,,,it's such an odd feeling. Have had this more than once Panagiota

Harry Horsman

July 7, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Shades of New Zealand, love your senryu, and Rock 'n' Roll.

Heidi Sands

July 7, 2019 at 7:56 AM

Well done. There sure is a lot of activity there. Stay safe! :)

Kim Rodrigues

July 7, 2019 at 7:32 AM

Are you in California! I felt the earth move back in 1980 near Eureka. 7.2 on the richter scale! It was the middle of the night. First earthquake for a Northeastern gal.