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Shake, Rattle, and Roll

I felt the ground move did you feel the earthquake too? shake, rattle, and roll

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2020 2:20:00 PM

On reading the title I thought it was going to be a percussion paradise...and I was not far off the mark. Bill Haley & his Comets also comes to mind! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/26/2020 8:46:00 AM

Hi Richard, This poem can be interpreted in many ways I woulds say you are on the merry go round of life! Blessings, May I please use your Quoth the Raven in my next super heroes poems, I have got permission from three other poets, but I would like to mention yours as well. if I may? Jennifer.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/24/2019 1:41:00 AM

Super silly and clever.poem! -JWE

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/9/2019 12:48:00 AM

Lol very nicely done! I truly enjoyed this!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/12/2019 12:44:00 AM

Ann, I choose the romantic spin, if I had a choice. Thanks anyway, and enjoy the day. -Richard

Ann Foster

Date: 10/11/2019 5:36:00 PM

I put a romantic spin, a crazy spin and then a panic spin on this. I read it all the different ways. Wonderful fun. Ann

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/5/2019 5:53:00 AM

Good times, old times... impressive work dear poet, salute alkas

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:22:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/23/2019 2:41:00 PM

There was a time I felt it almost every day, but luckily it was more like shiver, oscillate and sway) Nicely penned, QtR. Wish you solid ground under your feet.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2019 6:58:00 PM

Nice use of the lyric line in this one, Raven... Of course, rock'n'roll is one thing, while earthquakes are quite another... :) gw

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/14/2019 12:03:00 AM

Richard, Unfortunately, I suffer from ED. Earthquake Dysfunction. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/11/2019 10:32:00 AM

I usually only experience that in the throes of passion. ;0)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 7/10/2019 7:41:00 PM

Felt it once, shake, rattle and roll for sure. Hope we never feel it again. A great senryu.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/8/2019 11:23:00 AM

Hi Richard,,,it's such an odd feeling. Have had this more than once Panagiota

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/7/2019 3:43:00 PM

Shades of New Zealand, love your senryu, and Rock 'n' Roll.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/7/2019 7:56:00 AM

Well done. There sure is a lot of activity there. Stay safe! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2019 7:32:00 AM

Are you in California! I felt the earth move back in 1980 near Eureka. 7.2 on the richter scale! It was the middle of the night. First earthquake for a Northeastern gal.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/6/2019 2:20:00 PM

And run for your life...It's getting serious...

Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/6/2019 11:09:00 PM

Arturo, You better believe it..." _ ". -Richard

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2019 6:07:00 AM

You make it sound easy, when I wonder if it was....