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Shaft of Light

Where there is a gap in the dark gate There is a shaft of light, so intemerate. A ray that pulls all creatures to come along, To experience the magic,inspiration so strong. The sweet aroma in the air takes its course, To liven things up,with the illuminating force. The cold,drawn trees are filled with fervour , Dismayed,colourful butterflies now happily flutter. Birds soar the sky around While flowers enjoy the spotlight on the ground. The golden light sparkles as were to say- The clouded gate will open soon,light will make way. 2/8/2013

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Date: 2/17/2013 9:34:00 PM
Sadaf, stopping by to enjoy all of Seren's "Shaft of light " winners.. Congratulations with your awesome poem. xox~ PD
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:50:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Sadaf!
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Date: 2/17/2013 3:18:00 AM
Congrats Sadaf and thank you...Seren
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:12:00 AM
many congrats on your win in the contest Sadaf, beautifully done
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Date: 2/16/2013 10:32:00 PM
What a delightful read !! Congrats on your win in the shaft of light contest. Great couplets and smooth read. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:55:00 PM
this is so pretty , Sadaf. good luck in the contest.
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