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Shady Jedi Mind Tricks

Wherefrom poetry shades recall, and the other side of yesterday is but a dreamt hallucination, can't see the foliage from trees' darkly forested boundaries, insofar as frivolous moonbeams agitate sun's glorified imagism 'midst hues of baubled madness & vaporous sentiments are replete within day-trippers' remote motives, shadowing delusional chicanery of rosé-tinted Jedi mind tricks

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/27/2016 4:15:00 PM

Hey Paloma, life really does imitate art. EM waves coming from my high def TV are showing just what you wrote about in this poem. Creepy weird. Ha ha ha. Love the space age hip-trip ride. Gotta hang on tight when I go down your Alice-in-Poetland rabbit holes. Ty for the thrill ride though. Love always. RW

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/21/2016 4:30:00 PM

Wow Paloma....this is a wonderful deserving POTD! Congratulations! 7 ; )

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 5:08:00 AM

Much appreciated, thanks Connie! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/20/2016 10:29:00 PM

Hi Paloma, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. :-) Alexis

Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 6:08:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, much appreciated. :)

Chelcie Darling

Date: 10/20/2016 5:34:00 PM

Well Done! Great Job! ( :

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 5:57:00 PM

Thanks very much Chelcie! :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/20/2016 5:10:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured today Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Tim, much appreciate your thoughtfulness.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2016 4:18:00 PM

Many congrats on POTD Paloma:-) hugs Jan xx

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:24:00 PM

Many thanks Jan, much appreciated! :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/20/2016 12:05:00 PM

Powerful poetic chicanery. My compliments! You are a rising star in Poetry Soup.

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:12:00 PM

You're very kind, thanks so much Ralph!

Kenneth Birlin

Date: 10/20/2016 11:26:00 AM

Enjoyed the word play on this poem.

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:11:00 PM

Much appreciated, thanks Kenneth.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/20/2016 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations, Paloma on POTD honors. Your madness is maddening:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:11:00 PM

Ha, thanks for the smiles Daniel. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/20/2016 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Paloma:) your style is unique:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:10:00 PM

Nice of you to say Jo, thanks very much. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2016 7:20:00 AM

- Wooow, great and powerful lines Paloma - Congratulation on your p.o.t.d. - // Anne-Lise :)

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:09:00 PM

Much thanks for your enthusiastic review Anne-Lise! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/20/2016 7:19:00 AM

Your artwork, most worthy of POTD honors congratulations Paloma...

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:08:00 PM

Very kind of you to say Charlie, thank you.

Chris Green

Date: 10/20/2016 6:58:00 AM

Hey, congrats on the poem of the day!!!!!! It couldn't have gone to a more deserving poet. Bravo Paloma!!!!

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:07:00 PM

You're too kind Chris, many thanks!!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/18/2016 11:18:00 AM

Loved it...a fav!

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 5:02:00 AM

Thanks Maurice!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/18/2016 6:27:00 AM

how modern phrases in frivolous moonbeams, hues of baubled madness , vaporous sentiments ... and how unconventional images they bring up ... Great ...

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 5:00:00 AM

Thanks Probir, happy you enjoyed.

Chris Green

Date: 10/18/2016 6:15:00 AM

Ha, "rose-tinted Jedi mind tricks" I like that, nice close to an imagination fueled piece of art. Your poetry is spellbinding and I am under its spell.

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 5:00:00 AM

You made my morning, thanks Chris!