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Shadowy Places

I enter these deep, shadowy places However, I don’t really have a choice Reliving flashbacks, their evil faces Silencing me, abuse, taking my voice Torture was their way of keeping control They would resort to inflicting such pain These type of memories will always roll By facing these shadows, I always gain With no more running, I face what is true So now I can speak and today I can heal I take these shadows and make something new Empower myself, walk through what I feel This is my way to be all I can be Walk through the shadows, cast away evil Open doors within so that I can see All the truth, gently turned into beauty Heidi Sands 8/12/17

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Anita Harris

Date: 8/14/2017 8:08:00 PM

Touching and inspiring.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thank you Anita :)

Robert Nehls

Date: 8/13/2017 9:17:00 AM

Good morning Heidi. It is scary to walk into a world that once brought us so much pain. But, it is true that there is much to be gained from such an experience when viewed from the world that we now live in. I think we learn of the many positive attributes and strengths that we may not have recognized at that time. And we also learn how those experiences have shaped who we are now. You have said all of this and more in your poem and given me much to think about. Thank You... Robert

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 9:44:00 AM

Yes, exactly Robert. Thank you for your comment on this. I appreciate your kindness and I am happy this poem has reached you. :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/13/2017 5:24:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Best of Luck in the contest with your wondrous rhyme here on "Shadowy Places!!" A very captivating rhyme -- powerfully crafted. The last verse says it all. Superb Write!! Best Wishes, Gary

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you very much Gary. I appreciate your positive feedback on this one :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/13/2017 4:39:00 AM

This write will place high in the contest I'm sure Heidi! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! Such a fabulous piece of craftsmanship, a harmonious poem that I am glad I got to read! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Russell. You have offered positive support that I am grateful for :)