Shadowy Girlfriend--Jq

Shadowy GIRLFRIEND--


See the flirting of those eyes;
He's angry at the emprise;
Finds hard to see his girlfriend;
Shadowed by weak bitter end;

She is but an active mouth,
As she sits in the deep south;
The dove likes to chase a pen,
One that's in the winter wren;


For Jueju-Qijue With A Twist Poetry Contest
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March 12, 2019 at 6:27 AM
This really does the "twist" part well. Good luck in this one, I do not think you need it. I don't even understand the contest but this one is a winner.
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