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Shadows To the Sun

Pulling shadows to the sun, Never could quite pull enough Never could quite pull enough Yeah, loves not good for everyone Loves not good for every one Your lies they tore me in two You think it's easy without you I'm still shaded by the guilt Still hoping to pull ..through As I’m pulling shadows to the sun Hoping one day I’ll overcome The pains your rays have killed in me Still can’t see what you felt of me Can’t see Can’t see Can’t see what you felt of me Can’t see what you felt of me And I’m pulling shadows to the sun Never could quite pull enough Never could quite pull enough

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Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 9/2/2017 4:08:00 AM

oh dear i pray you can see it someday so that u can come out from the shadow of the sun...nicely penned!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/2/2017 2:58:00 PM

Thanks my friend, for stopping by. Welcome back, and thanks for the encouragement. <3~Laura

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/27/2017 8:45:00 PM

See soup mail. I have been absent and I apologize for that. It has to do with too much work pressure. It destroys the creative spirit. Anyway, love and affection is such a difficult endeavor. Some seem to make it look simple--but it is not. I just came back from Tennessee and a trip to view the total eclipse. There were all kinds of interesting shadows. Shadows do go in different directions and indicate all kinds of things. They're tough to hang onto.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/2/2017 2:53:00 PM

No worries! I completely understand. I've been absent for a while, though I have been posting here and there. I hope you enjoyed seeing the eclipse. Thanks for sharing that with me. You always post such meaningful comments. Thank you. <3~Laura

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2017 6:32:00 AM

Nice to see you writing lyrics.. a bit sad.. I know you have an awesome voice, so I think you would sing this really well..

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/2/2017 2:51:00 PM

That's sweet of you , thank you! I am meaning to catch up with your work. I have been busy as of late, but I will visit your page today. Hope you're doing well! <3~Laura