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In the dark, silent night contest...2/8/26

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Shadows Taunted Me in Darkness

I sat all alone in darkness as if tethered to this chair.
Light enough to see shadows. My fear was hard to bear.
They were trying to be daunting, their haunting profound
as they kept taunting me. Their faint whispers the only sound.

I begged them for silence, the specters without faces.
Constantly circling, creatures who wore black carapaces.
They frigidly nudged me, chilling the marrow in my bones.
Never before had I been more frightened than I was here alone.

In the hush of darkness, I trembled trying to speak.
A tear has escaped my lashes and rested upon my cheek.
Thoughts from my past were regrets my mind tried to chase,
searching for the wounded part of me my heart wanted to embrace.

I broke the silence of the night and set myself free
by rippling like a wave that found its way across the sea.
I chased the beastly shadows, trying to feast upon my soul
and illuminated the night when I found the courage to take control.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Now this is why i tell you dear linnersz, that you are such a versatile poetess, my friend, you can write on any theme any subject and leave us readers in awe , impressed and inspired! Youv expressed grief and darkness so vividly in such a poignant manner that made my heart hurt and soul stir, and feel so much so very deeply! You are one of the finest poets around and i am proud to be able to read you my friend! A new fave for me! Love every word in this! Sending you light always!
Lane Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 10:46 AM
You and I have spoken often enough to know that when it comes to heart hurting and soul stirring that we are on the same page of the same book. Your compliments on my poetry are taken to heart, and you know how much I value your remarks and your friendship. Hugs.
Narain Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Nice poem.
Lane Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Thanks
Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 11:58 AM
The reader can feel your words. Great picture... Light can make the fear go. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Lane Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 4:54 AM
Thanks so very much, Paula.
Cunningham Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 11:40 AM
The darkness is when all your fears surface and your mind plays tricks when you're in a fragile state , morning light can't come quick enough. Quite a dark foreboding write Lin. Poe would be proud of this one. Tom
Lane Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 4:53 AM
Thanks, Tom. I write Poeishly I titch too easily. lol. I’m not afraid of the dark and I don’t mind being alone.
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