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Shadows of the Valley

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Written: May 13, 2025, for contest by Robert James Liguori ******************* On the golden steed, dreams catch flight, In the sunny flame, rings of final sigh ignite. A pale horse and rider fit through the haze, Echoes of silence amid the shadow maze. A raven melody on the burial ground, Listen to the spooky melody where souls abound. No sights emerge from Earth's frigid embrace, Wind slashes across ashes in an endless chase. However, haunting tunes excite my soul, Your voice is an echo, drawing me whole. Beyond life's veil, we interact with grace, With God on our side, age shields its face. I trek into the freezing mist in quest of light, Mourning darkness hugs humanity tight. Sunless days drag back dreams of the dead, Demons sans souls laugh in mindless stead. Focus on the raven call and pray for Earth's life, Must humans explain everything for throe strife Find a wayward child and follow the wild north, Fear the black raven and adhere to the wise forth. He spent an obedient portion of his life on Earth, Dancing to the sound of the elderly man's mirth. The dread felt by those who bear an oath, In the text, he authored the screenplay for loath. Be honest and ask them the right requests, An outcry for liberation, a prayer for a life quest. Despite the events, lives have come to a halt, Ended before it started when the crowd exalt. I hear all waking dads crying as a crow flies distort, Life of the firstborn of mankind will be cut short. Cruelly facing risk is the panacea for each dilemma, As we hold in nonviolence, some are clear to edema. Every man's heart from the dawn of time, Having to live with seduction and crime. Ascending in the valley of demise, shadow, Knowing that I will bear my final air arrow. Embrace the Valley of Death with dignity, Despite the effects, we will act with divinity. Join me as I lead you into the depths of death, Yield me your soul and I will sip my last breath. O, be honest and ask them the right requests, An outcry for liberation, a prayer for a life quest. Despite the events, lives have come to a halt Ended before it started when the crowd exalt.

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Date: 5/15/2025 3:11:00 PM
SP, as you point out, we're all headed for our last day...and some sooner than later. Well, in the meantime, I hope we can treat each other well and find many occasions to smile. Take care and hopefully we'll have many happy days before we have to leave.
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Date: 5/14/2025 10:09:00 AM
So deep, Sotto, as all your poems are. Wow. You always nail every poem.
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Date: 5/13/2025 1:12:00 PM
Your "Shadows of the Valley" is a great write with a great ending. "Good Luck" Have a great day................
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Date: 5/13/2025 9:06:00 AM
A powerful and soul hitting write dr sotto, how well youv expressed here and written for the song! I love the cadence and the way youv made it dark but also balanced it with light of resilience here! I especially love the lines "Embrace the Valley of Death with dignity. Despite the effects, we will act with divinity." Whatever maybe the situation to live and act with divinity and dignity is crucial, i hear that through this well delivered poem! Im sure will be a winner! Robert always appreciates such poetic brilliance! Pleasure reading! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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