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Shadows From the Walls

And I watched
as my shadow evolved,
Fear overcame 
as it crept up on me

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James Peranteau

March 22, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Great write jimmer ! A weee bit to creepy for me, but readable. Hope your fine son.......have a safe journey today...much love, Pops

Constance La France

March 17, 2015 at 4:07 PM

Jimi, the title of this poem called to me and the poem itself is well done, thought provoking and deep and thanks so much for visiting my poem weeping . . .

Charmaine Chircop

March 16, 2015 at 5:15 PM

Oh those walls that suffocate us and the image of who we truly are.So deep!!

Anthony Cassano

March 16, 2015 at 11:45 AM

Excellent Jim. I am answering your comment here: For some reason I can't reply to your comment (or any others for that matter). Thank you for noticing the content of my poem. I have a few others. They were written by me for a very close friend who is a dominant mistress. I will post the others if you are interested. Anthony

Jimi Peranteau

March 16, 2015 at 11:47 AM

Absolutely would

Daver Austin

March 16, 2015 at 11:23 AM

Yes, the walls and images we set up for ourselves. Good stuff. Love, daver

Jimi Peranteau

March 16, 2015 at 11:28 AM

That's just amazing, I put up one line from a song I wrote and you're able to understand the meaning of the entire piece! Thank you for making my day!