Shadows From the Walls

And I watched
as my shadow evolved,
Fear overcame 
as it crept up on me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/22/2015 4:33:00 PM
Great write jimmer ! A weee bit to creepy for me, but readable. Hope your fine son.......have a safe journey today...much love, Pops
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Date: 3/17/2015 4:07:00 PM
Jimi, the title of this poem called to me and the poem itself is well done, thought provoking and deep and thanks so much for visiting my poem weeping . . .
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Date: 3/16/2015 5:15:00 PM
Oh those walls that suffocate us and the image of who we truly are.So deep!!
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Date: 3/16/2015 11:45:00 AM
Excellent Jim. I am answering your comment here: For some reason I can't reply to your comment (or any others for that matter). Thank you for noticing the content of my poem. I have a few others. They were written by me for a very close friend who is a dominant mistress. I will post the others if you are interested. Anthony
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Jimi Peranteau
Date: 3/16/2015 11:47:00 AM
Absolutely would
Date: 3/16/2015 11:23:00 AM
Yes, the walls and images we set up for ourselves. Good stuff. Love, daver
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Jimi Peranteau
Date: 3/16/2015 11:28:00 AM
That's just amazing, I put up one line from a song I wrote and you're able to understand the meaning of the entire piece! Thank you for making my day!
Date: 3/14/2015 8:57:00 PM
Jimi, awesome... i don't like creepy shadow... enjoyed...SKAT
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