Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Shadows, Dear Sister And Brother -

Don't keep on judging
You make me sick
Break your brother's spirit
Your hatred is a mockery
A world is surrounded by darkness
It will always drip blood from a new wound
Although it pains ... you can never win
We share ink and love ... not deadly poison
You've fallen deep ... very deep
A shame















16.08.2017
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Lynn Marie August 25, 2017 at 5:36 PM Whatever happened to treating others as we wish to be treated. A little kindness goes a long way and I am grateful to you for being a beacon of inspiring light Anne-Lise:). It's sad your words need to be said; you have penned it wonderfully. blessings xo Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2017 at 3:51 PM - Many thanks Lynn, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock August 19, 2017 at 5:17 PM Your words are so true and we all need to be brothers and sisters in peace and love. We need to light the world not bring darkness. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2017 at 2:22 PM - Yes, we need light, peace and love our world dear Phyllis :) - Thank you very much for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One August 18, 2017 at 6:16 AM Hate only breeds hate, sad that it is common in the soup.. I ignore it my friend, it is the best way to deal with it, yet it makes me sad, when my friends get harassed.. You have a beautiful soul and spirit, I wish that small minority would share the beauty in your heart.. Peace and love my friend.. Also those who have fallen, can still be saved.. As we rise, by lifting others... Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2017 at 2:19 PM - This is not about me my friend S.O., but there are many who receive unfriendly messages on Soup - It makes me sad - Thank you very much for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen August 17, 2017 at 4:59 PM what a pretty write friend, positive feelings is what we all ought to have. Well penned poem. Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2017 at 2:55 AM - Ink and love, Afolabi :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 17, 2017 at 9:57 AM There is no room for hatred in this world. Sending warm wishes. Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 12:03 PM - Hate occupying already too much space on our planet, we do not need it in our "soup", Tim - Thank you very much, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 17, 2017 at 8:22 AM Great write my dear Anne-Lise...unfortunately, people have different feelings and opinions...some make bad choices in leaving...hopefully they will see the light and come back...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 11:58 AM - Yes, we all have different feelings (!) and opinions (!) ... you're right W.W. ... and it's all right - But !!! ... do not hurt others because you do not agree - No one MUST (!) read my poems if they HATE (!) them - Thank you very much for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams August 17, 2017 at 8:16 AM Anne -Lise, a wonderful write, I have no doubt in whose honour you have written this. PS is a microcosm on our planet, should be a recreation for all, to enjoy and share, and not a a soapbox for criticism and petty grievances. I joined for relaxation but am also getting disenchanted with the negative competitiveness and all this rubbish...Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 11:46 AM - There is a lot of trash and has always been, Maria - Person attacks are not acceptable - I appreciate your words and visits, thank you very much - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan August 17, 2017 at 7:04 AM What an emotional write Anne! So much truth in this... Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 11:47 AM - Thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 6:25 AM So true--we share ink and love--thanks for highlighting this, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 7:13 AM - Many thanks for visiting my poem today, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey August 17, 2017 at 4:28 AM What a beautifully crafted write Anne-Lise, so very true too! I will not leave you my friend, I'll always be around, though sometimes I may be on Hiatus , but I'll always be back! I shouldn't be gone on Hiatus again however as school has taken a turn for the better! Your piece here is so fabulous I believe it deserves a fave! What a wonderful poem, Great Work!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 7:11 AM - Over and over again .... injustice and hatred ... I'm so sorry ... "The soup" is a "small society" ... compared to a whole world ... Why can we not have respect for each other's feelings, opinions, or religion? - Many thanks for a fav. and lovely comment, Russel - I appreciate it a lot :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 16, 2017 at 10:33 PM I too feel the same emotion as Victor.. Why do they have to cause havoc and ruin it for everyone. I have started not to read their work, why give them the gratitude they think they are getting which they are not. They are just showing themselves as fools and the adolescent level of thinking. Thank you for writing your feelings... Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 1:56 AM - Eve, thank you for the comment, glad to have your visit to my page today :) - I appreciate it a lot :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman August 16, 2017 at 3:23 PM Anne-Lisa you chose you PS name very well, and yes we don't leave our friends, wonderful poetry and so,so apt. Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2017 at 1:59 AM - Thank you very much, Harry - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)